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Tuesday, September 6, 2016

What An Amazing Ski Trip!

What An Amazing Ski Trip 

here is a video of me reading a story to you!

                                                 I think my is amazing I have put fall stops and capitals 
                                                  but I need to be a little bit louder and have more expretion but it was kind 
                                                 kind of fun because I have never done it befor.
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  1. AnonymousSeptember 7, 2016 at 9:50 AM

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 7, 2016 at 10:05 AM

    hey there my name is Kaunteya from GIlberthorpe school I enjoyed watching that cool ski video. I liked the way you put full stops and capitals. Some of the facts you used were really good.But did you think about putting in what you enjoyed about?

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 8, 2016 at 9:56 AM

    Hi Sonny here I now know that you are a great reader,and I loved your story about the ski trip.
    By Sonny#

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